Mary Jane Attempt no.1

Another work-in-progress of the Mary Jane commission, this was my first attempt at the end of 2004 and was CERTAIN that I had done it. I even told Kid Komix that I had 'nailed' the pencils.

Two years later, he got the commission. I don't exactly remember why I so completely fell out of love, I kinda like her face, and I'd like to think it's because it didn't feel like MJ to me.

But I think it's more likely that I felt it was too much of a rip-off of a MJ picture by